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Oh the tale I have to tell,
Of a love between a boy and woman, in which both fell
She was his mentor
He was her inspiration in his innocence censored.
Taking him into her home, for a time
She let him watch her hours upon hours sublime
Then came the night when the moon was full
Her voice carried to where he was on a breeze warmly cool
He rose to find her in her room filled with candles burning
He saw her as a form in front of their light, alluring satin so alluring.
His hands burned to touch her
His lips wet with the anticipation of a kiss, he was almost there
His eyes lit with that ever so ancient fire
His body shivered with total desire.
She said not a word, not a whisper, not a sound
She merely held out her arms, enchantment pulled him to her to him surround
Satin kissed his bare skin, with a silky breeze blown touch
She felt his need, she knew that need so much, so much.
Her hands burned to touch him
Her lips wet with anticipation of a kiss, she was almost there
Her eyes lit with that ever so ancient fire.
Her body quivered and trembled with all her known desires.
She let him melt against her in his boyish charming way
She molded herself to him in a much more learned caress, and oh they swayed, they swayed
She let him take into his hands her face soft
He lowered his lips starving to hers and drank his full to fill his drought
She was the river that flowed into his soul
He was the taker from her giving, worshiping her as holy
Their hands burned as they raked and caressed
Their lips tasted, sweet nectar, marzipan sweet of each they drank, now release
Their eyes held Fires in them, they  costumed each other in complete totality
Their bodies quivered, and she felt him sigh into her, decadent love giving unselfishly solely
As he lay in her arms she felt finally the quiet breathing of his gentle young sleep
As he lay sleeping from that bed now she did rise, and as a shadow did she creep
To the door, turning for a last look and a smile
She closed it behind her, changed , started her gt, leather satchel thrown, she was making miles.
When the morning sun hit his eyes, he reached for her, this woman that had lighted up his passion fires.
Smiling only a smile he would understand, he reached to her pillow and took off the note and black rose.
"Go on, go forth, love a woman as I have loved you, they are out there, you know it, so go find her, arise, go
And my heart as it is breaking will be no mistaken moment, twill always be held in the rose, to you a silent monument."
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tis a bit controversial - but it is true.

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:iconblackpearlrayn:
w---o---w.... this is soooo good i love it

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The Angel of romance soars high above. So wonderfully written.

His lips wet with the anticipation of a kiss (oh that feeling is so familiar)


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:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose::blackrose:

Why thank you so much, it is drawn on a true incident that did occur but it was lurid or bad. And it was not my doing but a sister 12 years older that did it.Either way , it is a great love story.

katti
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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconvaledhelven:
Controversial, perhaps... but no less real or tragic or passionate or lovely or any other adjectives you want to toss in there :heart:

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:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose::blackrose::blackrose:

I am talking about someone that I called a 'boy' because I was just through recovery and out back into the world. I met him through another friend of mine, and he was beautiful! He had long black hair, and incredible eyes, we sat at this party and we talked and talked for hours. HE thought I was 19- well we laughed about it! He asked if he could come with me, and I said sure an we sat by my fireplace with candles lit till dawn, then we went to the park and watched the sun rise. He asked me to teach him about women like me, I am not sure what he meant, but I taught him to treat women as ladies,
I taught him how to cook so he could cook dinners for his love when he found her, I taught him about wines, well you get where I am going. And we still stay in touch, and the amazing thing is this, other than that one night, he is still only had one lover on one night, and is waiting till he meet the one that he knows is HER! HE is just so awesome! AND I ADORE HIM. Thank you hun for all your lovely comments. You are a true heart.

always a friend,
katti
:blackrose:

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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose::blackrose:

And ain't it grand! He was as I stated above 17. He was not a boy like 13, 14, well you understand, I would never do anything like that. You are constantly lifting me, it is through your quill that I find understanding of things that touch me so deeply that I have a little crystal box in my heart where I treasure them.Thank you dear, for always being there for me, an thank you dearest for pulling me out of the well.

always and forever,
katti
:blackrose:

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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconlacolombededeuil:
:blackrose::blackrose:

Okay actually it was me, but I went to your gallery and I wanted to make sure before I told you that. And I knew that I could after I read some of the stuff on your DA first page.

katti
:blackrose:

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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
:iconvaledhelven:
And I'll bet you were a passionate and tender teacher, my friend :cuddle: No matter where he goes, you will always be SO special to him...

...Is it hot in here or is it just me?... :phew: I need some air...

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This is simply beautiful and tender.

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