"Passion - it lives, it breathes, it exists within us,
To inspire us, to invoke us, to entice us to find adventure in all life."
"It is the fire that burns within our blood,
It is the little voice in our mind we hear,
That urges us, that taunts us, that seduces us to go beyond even our fears."
"Passion - it is the reason."
"It is the reason that the sun seeks out the horizon with such intensity,
To burn it, with its kiss of rays complete
Filling then all of life with its passionate heat."
"It is the source of all that is power in nature.
"It is the gale of a hurricane."
"It is the flash of the lightning as the storm thunders out its name.
"It is the cause of the frantic rush of the waves to kiss the shore.
"It is the touch of a lover's lips to another in the beginning of a dance of
Unending joy.
"Passion is who we are."
k
"Passion is either our very life's breath or the very final beat of our heart in its death."















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K
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come and nestle thy wounded spirit in the feathers of my oasis and feel it
feel the softest lightest touch of soothing
hear the gentlest barely audible words of one who through them is renewing
all that life has cast thy way, this I vow, each night on
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i hurt inside, make it stop, oh plese make it stop, i shudent have to bear this torment, but your face, your eyes, your lips, i long for your love
A bit of proofreading:
It's = It is. Its is the possessive form of it.
So you need, in lines 8, 9, and 12, its heat, its passionate heat, its name.
Also, hurricane in line 13 and another's in line 14.
Anyway, some good thoughts here, and nice images.
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Ed
"If you're not confused, you're misinformed." - Tom Clancy
The Trouble with a Love Poem
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A prayer for the wild at heart, kept in cages - Tenessee Williams
its so true♥
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i just want back in your head.
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"No love, no friendship can cross the path of our destiny without leaving some mark on it forever" (Francois Mauriac)
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